Nikki, I don't know what your assignment is, so I'm not sure what you're aiming for. I'd say it needs something more "solid" now, or darker -- maybe just add a little sketch or a pattern of lines to get yourself going?
I agree - it looks washed out and I think I would try shading or darker lines around the motifs. Not necessarily black but just something to bring it alive.
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Nikki, I don't know what your assignment is, so I'm not sure what you're aiming for. I'd say it needs something more "solid" now, or darker -- maybe just add a little sketch or a pattern of lines to get yourself going?
I agree - it looks washed out and I think I would try shading or darker lines around the motifs. Not necessarily black but just something to bring it alive.
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